open your skull
try to
realise what it means
when you’re alone and
gasping for
air
those moments when love
immerses you
in its nature
the desperate sense of longing
that takes over
yearning
for the one you love’s embrace
the one your dreams
revolve around
who sleeps deep inside your heart
making a nest until
they’ve made it their own
the essence of a lover
the beauty of their soul
like fresh snow
bathed in glorious moonlight
there’s no greater feeling
in life
no stronger sign
of the power of love
when there’s no way of knowing
where you end
and they begin
oneness
inseparable and true
Categories: Poetry
‘oneness’ with another is a serene and wonderful experience. It leaves an imprint that you can never shake.
I agree absolutely. Life without it would be horror.
Wow. I love your analogy of comparing love to moonlight on freshly fallen snow. I love how that looks when there are no street lights around, and I think it really does make the perfect imagery for love. I like when you spoke of not knowing where one person ends and the other begins. Love is beautiful, and that sense of connection is something I have come to cherish. Very beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you, it means a lot to me for you to say these things. I’m glad that you resonated so much with my words, it’s always comforting when somebody else seems to understand how you feel about something. It’s really pleasing that you could resonate with the imagery x
I drowned myself in this one. But in a good way.
Love the feeling being lost in the words that creates another worlds. đ
Thank you, I’m genuinely thrilled you enjoy what I write, and that it has an impact on you đ